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Doug  Stoiber's avatar

"Pain Suisse" is an impressive, dramatic work. My mouth actually watered when I read: " Through chews of

20 Butter-flaked canals, "

Bravo.

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Sharon Cummins's avatar

What writer or would-be writer wouldn't enjoy this poem AND its perfect conclusion!

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Kat's avatar

“Weighty and low. Twist my neck, pinched down to Earth. I try to listen, give it shape.“ this is such a lovely way to describe grounding 💙

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